Work In Progress: ‘1893’

To be honest, I am now working on only one thing, and when that is done, I won’t be working on anything else until the New Year. I believe I have said before, I aim to have ‘1893’ ready for you before Christmas.

A quick summary:

Five characters meet in a fog-bound railway station the night before Christmas Eve, 1893, and there, they are catered for by the stationmaster, Harry Carnforth. Their onward train is delayed, so they spend the night telling each other stories. There is also a plot surrounding these shorts, so the book, like ‘1892’, is a set of short stories set within a novella, I suppose. It, like its counterpart, should run to about 60,000 words.

I am currently up to 51,000 words, but I still have a way to go, so there will be editing involved later.

I have given myself until the end of this month to produce a decent second draft, so I need to get on with it, as there are still two stories to complete, plus the rest of the outer story which wraps them.

To, hopefully, keep you interested, here is another quick snippet, this time from (the unedited) ‘The Barrister’s Tale, Part One.’


Chapter VI
THE BARRISTER’S TALE, PART ONE

Hard leather soles clacked on the marble tiles as the defence barrister (to be) hurried to the robing room. With his morning’s brief under one arm, and his beloved copy of Blackstone’s under the other, he shouldered his way backwards through a pair of double doors, and clacked his way into another, longer and more hallowed marble corridor. There, a murder of hooded crows flitted this way and that, stopped to peck over some titbit of a case, or hung around the alcoves smoking pipes, but mainly, they were in the process of finding a place to settle for the morning; a courtroom where they could caw and crow and jabber and feel very important because they knew the law.

Creswell, head down, knew exactly what room he was making for, and also knew that the slightest delay would cause him to be late. All the same, there were rituals to follow, and they began with the ancient Rite of the Unnecessary Greeting, where each exchange was accompanied by a brief nod.

‘Creswell.’

‘Blinkinthop.’

‘Creswell.’

‘Smitherston-Minor.’

‘It’s Smitherson-Major, actually.’

‘That’s a matter of opinion. Mackay.’

‘Creswell.’

‘Creswell… Blithering idiot, that’s a mirror.’

The robing room was just as hectic, but also a place where the Rite of the Unnecessary Greeting became expanded.

‘Creswell.’

‘Jones.’

‘Are you well?’

‘Well enough. What you got?’

‘Theft. It’s all theft this morning.’

‘Morning, Creswell.’

‘Larrow.’

‘I think you’re up against me.’

Creswell was, because he was reaching over the man to collect a book.

‘Who do we have to entertain this morning, Mr Larrow? Any idea?’

In Creswell’s opinion, Larrow had very little idea about anything, certainly not the law. How he ever became a barrister was beyond Creswell’s ken, and he had hoped for a more worthy opposition in the, hopefully, last case of his pupillage.

‘No, I have no idea,’ the prosecution replied, donning his wig to become more like a white-headed woodpecker than a hooded crow. He certainly had the nose for it. ‘Clerk told me a name, but it’s not one I know. He’s coming in from out of town, they say. The Honourable…’ he examined a docket, ‘Sir Barkley Sproot, but no-one seems to have heard of him.

‘Then I, alas, am also no-one,’ Creswell said, fixing the last of his plumage. ‘Let’s hope Sproot’s a hoot, eh?’

‘Hoot is the word,’ Larrow quipped as he headed for the door.

‘Oh? Why?’

‘Read your brief, Creswell,’ the opposition replied and was lost to the flock.


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What Next?

With ‘A Depraved Indifference’ now out there and available, I start to wonder, ‘What next?’

I am currently writing notes and drafts for another collection of shorts to make up a Clearwater Tales Volume Two, and have the prologue, half of one character’s story, nearly all of another’s, and no idea what the other three stories and the through-line will be. Also, I am talking things slowoy at eth desk for a while, thanks to various repateteive strain injuries. We’re going away on a trip in just over six weeks, so there will be a two week break over Christmas, a break from everything for a change. I am usual here on Christmas Day checking emails and sales, but not this year. I shall be elsewhere.

Meanwhile, though, the first review of ‘Indifference’ is in, and the reviewer was not indifferent at all.

The book is also currently #21 in LGBT + Mystery on Amazon, doing better than some books that have (allegedly) more than 24,500 star ratings. How does any book get that many, I wonder?

Talking of reviews, I found this one for Deviant Desire today, and I wish there was a way of replying to the reviewer. This is a great idea for another Clearwater prequel, though it would mean some intense research in naval procedures, ranks and all that, and a bit of imagination, but I am used to that.

Dear Mr. Marsh: I would love to read a back story prequel on Simon Harrington, the guy who was apparently All That and a bag of chips. Three men fell deeply in love with him, fought viciously over him, and two of them went insane because of him. That’s a story I’d love to read.

I shall have a think and add it to my list of possibilities for the future. Or maybe I could include the story in the next Clearwater Tales, the one I am tinkering with right now? There’s a thought… I’d better get writing.


PROMOS

Here’s today’s list of books for you to browse and consider.

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A Thriller of a Blurb?

Hello!

I have the blurb for ‘A Depraved Indifference’, the Delamere Files, Book Ten. The MS is with the proofreader, who has already attended to the blurb and author’s notes for me, and I am also talking to Scott about a map for the front of this one – so, as they say, it’s all go!

I also have another great collection of thrillers and mysteries to share with you, and I’ll put the link at the bottom of this post.

Meanwhile, here’s the blurb:

A Depraved Indifference
The Delamere Files Book Ten

Jack Merrit longs for a case more challenging than burglaries and missing jewels, and when someone finds a skeleton inside a pipe organ, his wish comes true. At first, the strange discovery in the church of St Clement Danes seems like a prank, but when Jack’s next call is to a crime within earshot of the bells of St Martin’s, an uneasy pattern emerges.

Oranges and lemons say the bells of St Clement’s
You owe me five farthings, say the bells of St Martin’s

And then, the murders start.

If the first is chance, a second becomes a coincidence, but a third? That’s a pattern, and these are no ordinary murders. They occur in churches named in the rhyme, and they involve diabolical contraptions that kill seemingly random victims. Asked by both London police forces to investigate without being told why, Jack and his men embark on an investigation knowing where the killer will strike next, but not when.

When the killer invites Jack to join his game, a contest of intellect begins, and knowing failure will lead to disgrace, he pits himself against his most cunning adversary so far.


Thriller, Mystery & Suspense – Huge promo

You can click on either or both of these links; they will take you to the same place, but either James or Jackson will get the kudos (and score) generated by your click.

The 51 titles in this promo take us mainly into the world of straight adventure, mystery and thrillers. I had a look, and I think my ‘Finding a Way’ is the only gay and historical offering, but you never know, it might pick up some new readers.

The same goes for my ‘The Saddling’ which is in here. (Note: I must get Andjela to design me a new cover.)

The Saddling              James Collins

Finding a Way             Jackson Marsh

First Draft Done

This will be just a very quick update to let you know the first draft of ‘A Depraved Indifference’ is now complete. Phew! That was a fun one to work through. You will be in for an adventure in mystery. There’s no angst or love story, and not much personal difficulty in this story, not with my main characters. However, the villain is the one who carries the emotional through line, and that’s about the first time I’ve written that way, so that was interesting.

I am now about to start on my reading back. I should point out that when I say the first draft is finished, I mean I have reached the end of telling myself the story. As I have been doing that, I have also been going back and rereading, making changes, improving, and second-drafting chapters, so really, I am about to embark on my third draft, which is mainly a case of fiddling with, improving, checking, and saying, ‘What on earth did I mean by that?’

Meanwhile, I will send Andjela some ideas for a cover and think about an illustration. Does it need one? I can’t put in an image of the villain because I don’t know what he looks like, and anyone else would seem out of place. We’ll see.

The monthly newsletter should be out this morning with a freebie kind of attached (you find the freebie via a link), and I’ll tell you more about the promos I am in later in the month.

WIP: A Depraved Indifference

Things are heating up. The crimes are becoming more baffling; someone’s not saying something for some reason (there’s a cover-up), but Jack and Bax are determined to put a stop to someone’s evil game before it’s too late. It’s already too late for some, and the pressure is on from both London police forces. To top it all, I think I have invented Jack’s ultimate sparring partner, the evil genius who will hound him for the rest of his career, and probably afterwards. Someone who may appear in the next story, or who may vanish for a while, only to resurface later…

As you might gather, ‘A Depraved Indifference’ is really taking shape, and I am now into the final reel. There are still roughly 25,000 words to go (at least) to bring the story to whatever conclusion it will have, but I am up to 73,000 words and, at last, Jack and his men finally have some information they can work on. The next big clue will be an invitation, but before I get there, I need to investigate something that has happened at St Dunstan’s Church, Stepney.

‘When will that be? Say the bells of Stepney.’

That will be as soon as I have posted this and made another cup of tea. Then, I will continue with chapter twenty-four. Soon, I’ll have to set about writing the blurb and thinking of a cover. Gosh, this being a full-time author thing makes for a great life!

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The promoters say that the kind of Historical romances that qualify will be:
– a book that ends in a HEA or HFN
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Well, made for Clearwater or what? I’ve entered Deviant Desire and Finding a Way into this one. I couldn’t add the Larkspur Series, because I could only put in two books, but Larkspur runs on from Clearwater, so people will find it on their own – if they make it through the 10 Clearwater stories, which I hope they do.

There are 39 titles to check out.

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WIP Update: A Depraved Indifference

The work in progress news this week is that I am now up to 63,000 words of the first draft of A Depraved Indifference. The mystery has thickened, and finding a solution has become more urgent because there have now been two major incidents to which Jack and Baxter have been called. So far, they have visited four churches around London, and if you want a clue as to why, then take a scroll down to Saturday’s post. We have also met a couple of new characters from the City of London Police who may survive the story or who may not, and we have also met our villain. Sort of.

We still don’t know who he is, but we know why he is doing what he is doing. I wanted a subplot for this story; otherwise, it’s simply a mystery, and wouldn’t have enough depth, so I thought the subplot could be the villain’s backstory, and the explanation for why he is doing what he is doing. I want the reader to feel sorry for him, yet not. To empathise with him, but wish they didn’t, because of the things he does. That’s the idea I am playing with, yet I still don’t know his name. Maybe we never will. Maybe I will save that for a future story.

That’s the joy of ‘making it up as you go along’ aka writing; you can do what you want because, after all, you are writing a novel, and it is meant to be novel.

So, I shall get back to it and keep you up to date in future posts.

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Chapter 15

I am now at chapter 15 of the first draft of ‘A Depraved Indifference.’ Chapter 15 is usually what I consider the halfway mark. Roughly. As I’ve said before, I aim to make each of my mysteries around 100,000 words in length, and it just so happens that, at the end of chapter 14, I am up to 47,000 words, so another three thousand through chapter 15, and I will be stepping over the threshold into Act Three. Or that may happen in chapter 16, depending on how Jack’s meeting goes with Inspector Smith of the City of London Police, which is about to happen.

The Four Acts

If you were wondering about the four acts, it’s a very common film structure, particularly for action/adventure films.

Act One, there’s no problem, everything’s as it should be, and then there’s a call to adventure, and the hero takes it, or deliberates, then must take the adventure.

Act Two, he’s now got a problem to deal with, so the question is, what is this problem?

Act Three, after a halfway twist or turning point, he now knows what the problem is, but not how to deal with it, so Act Three is about ‘How do I solve this?’ This can involve gaining emotional as well as physical strength.

Act Four begins around the crisis of the story, when the final obstacles are in his way and he must overcome them in order to succeed. He must go ‘underground’ as it were in a ritualistic rite of passage to he can emerge victorious at the climax. There’s then a denouement or rounding off of leftover themes, and that’/s about it.

So, my Chapter 15 is happening around the time of the end of Act Two, and we’re just about to have a twist. Kind of. Anyway, that’s where I am with ‘A Depraved Indifference.’ And now…

Promos

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This one runs until the 20th September. There are 46 titles covering all aspects of mystery and thriller, and my three series starters are in the list.

Monthly Menagerie of Menage

This promo is open to steamy books with two or more love interests. As you might tell from the title, there’s a heat element to this collection. That’s why I put in my only really ‘hot’ title, ‘The Mentor of Wildhill Farm,’ which, tbh, is often more heat than anything else! There are 17 books here, but they include str8 novels, box sets and collections.

Snake Hill on Kindle and KU

Snake Hill is now available on Kindle and in KU. Here’s the universal link.

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That should take you to your appropriate Amazon site, and all will be well. The paperback version should be out next week. We’re just organising the full cover, which is something we can’t do until we know the page count, which we now know. So… In case you have missed it, here’s the blurb.

Albert Arbon collapses at Delamere House after a three-day trek. His only son, Robert, has vanished after seeing a strange light in the Suffolk sky, and Arbon is desperate to find him.

Detectives Jack and Baxter, with young Simeon, accompany Arbon back to his remote Suffolk farmhouse, only to find themselves faced with a combination of rural legends seemingly tied to a series of unsettling events. A body lies inexplicably in the middle of an untouched wheat field. Other children have gone missing. There is talk of a ‘fire snake’, and no-one dare share the secrets of what can be seen from Snake Hill.

As the investigation deepens, Jack must navigate more than the mystery. He must also face the burdens of responsibility — not only for uncovering the truth and doing the right thing, but also for guiding Simeon, a boy on the cusp of manhood, who’s willing to risk everything to prove himself.

What Next? Delamere Ten.

You might not be surprised to know I am already working on Delamere 10, and it has the title of ‘A Depraved Indifference.’ I am working with the idea that will combine:

Murders past and future.

A nursery rhyme.

Several London churches.

A Church organ.

So far, it starts on Simeon’s 17th birthday, so it’s set in August 1893.

My original idea for Delamere was to see where Jimmy Wright had come to, following his entry into the Clearwater world back in ‘Twisted Tracks’ in 1888 (although his first appearance is in Deviant Desire, but it’s very brief). I soon discovered that Jack and Will Merrit were to be my leads, and so, the series has become their story, and I, for one, am enjoying exploring their lives. I was going to write one book for each of 12 months of their lives, but that’s kind of gone by the by. Having said that, we’re on book ten (almost) and the series started in June 1892 and we’re only now in August 1893, so I haven’t done too badly. A lot has happened in that time.

I often wonder if it’s too much and how long a series should run for. I think, as long as I am writing a good, entertaining read, and as long as people are still enjoying the stories, i.e. buying them, then I’ll carry on until it feels right to finish. If you have any other ideas, let me know.

Meanwhile… It will soon be September promo time, so get ready for a new list, but in the meantime, there’s a new one just started up a few days ago, and we’re in it, so if you want to boost my kudos, hit the banner. This is a collection so thriller and mystery reads that are available on a variety of platforms.

Snake Hill. Delamere Files Book Nine. Update.

Hi all,
A quick thing before we get to news of ‘Snake Hill.’

Newsletter

If you are subscribed to my newsletter, you should have received one yesterday with news on Snake Hill, and news of a few more interesting promos to check out.

If you haven’t subscribed to my newsletter, you can do it now on this page. Just check out the top right of the column or go to the newsletter page.

If you do sign up, and you have any problems, will you let me know? I’ve not had many new joiners for a while now, and I wonder if it is something to do with the process. Looking forward to having you on board. Thank you.

Snake Hill Update

The news on Delamere Nine is that it will be going off to the proofreader in a day or so. Meanwhile, I have commissioned a cover from Andjela, and I will show you that when I have it. I have also commissioned a drawing of one of the characters, the protagonist in this case, as it is he who sets off the chain of events that lead to all kinds of madness and mayhem, thrills (I hope) and adventure. I have drafted a vague blurb, and here it is:

When Albert Arbon arrives on Delamere’s doorstep after a three-day trek, his desperation is unmistakable — his son Robert has vanished following a night of strange lights in the Suffolk sky.

Detectives Jack and Baxter, with young Simeon, accompany Arbon back to his remote farmhouse, only to find themselves facing a tangle of rural legends and unsettling events. A body lies inexplicably in the middle of an untouched wheat field. Other children have gone missing, and no-one dare speak of the Fire Snake or share the secrets of Snake Hill.

As the investigation deepens, Jack must navigate more than a mystery. He must face the burdens of responsibility — not only for uncovering the truth, but for guiding Simeon, a boy on the cusp of manhood, who’s willing to risk everything to prove himself.

As I may have mentioned, there’s a background theme of growing up, coming of age, rites of passage, paternal responsibility, father and son… that kind of thing. Also, this is the first book in the series that (apart from a couple of chapters) takes place outside of London, putting Jack and Bax in a brand new environment.

Some of the dialogue and some of the stories told within the story make use of the East Anglian dialect. On Saturday, I will start to introduce you to some of the wonderful words and their meanings in this dialect. So, tune back in on Saturday…

And remember about the newsletter… And, take a look at this promo in the meantime:

MAYHEM & MOTIVES: Mystery, Thriller, & Suspense Reads – August Edition
Here’s my usual entry with Book-Mojo’s monthly collection of thrillers. This month, there’s a whopping 144 titles to browse, including, for the first time, my Holywell Street. I wonder if a topless Baxter will be enough to draw in some new readers?

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Delamere Nine Update

Hi folks. I didn’t post a Saturday blog as I was up to my eyes in other work, and today, I have only a quick update on Delamere nine and life in general.

First of all, I am at 82,000 words of the first draft and nearing the climax. When I work on a first draft, it’s not simply a case of blasting through and reaching the end. If I did that, I’d have a first draft finished in roughly a month, whereas it takes me about two. The main reason is that I am constantly going back and reading earlier chapters, and as I read them, I alter them. Some days I will sit here and write 4,000 words and say, ‘That’s chapter ten done,’ or whatever. Other days, I will say, ‘The head isn’t in the right place today,’ and then I will go back and edit, improve and change earlier chapters. It’s a question of mood. Today, for example, I have to do some other work first, then I have some non-writing jobs to se to, so any time I have, I will probably use it to make notes, or go back and do come checking. If the creative head isn’t in the right place (or the write place, you might say), then there’s no point in pushing it.

I thought this chap reminded me of a young Ronny.

It’s also very warm here right now, with temperatures up to 40° in the daytime and around 30° at night. There are still the household chores to see to, though Neil is usually the poor old thing who sees to them while I am working. He’s out this morning, so I have to water the plants, make sure the water barrel fills, do some washing while doing other things, because it’s a day when the water comes in. We only have one barrel, and once the water stops coming in, whatever is in the barrel must last us until the next fill up two, sometimes three or four, days later.

And talking of water, I must research a place on the River Orwell in Suffolk, which is where I left Jack and Baxter yesterday, in a pub, surrounded by a gang of evil smugglers. Must get on!

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