The Class of Delamere, 1894

I wrote ‘A Night of Opposites’ with class in mind. The 19th century, particularly the Victorian era, saw prolific writing on the subject of the strata of society.

Friedrich Engels’ The Condition of the Working Class in England appeared in 1845, and is a landmark study of the industrial proletariat. What we might call ‘social’ novels by authors such as Charles Dickens and Elizabeth Gaskell talked about class divisions in works such as Hard Times (1854) and Mary Barton (1848).

Then, there were the social surveys. Most famous of all is Charles Booth’s massive survey, Life and Labour of the People in London (1886–1903). This provided a detailed, mapping-based analysis of poverty and class.

Charles Booth’s Poverty Map and Delamere
Let’s have a quick look at where Jack and Will grew up, according to the map, which was published only a few years before the events of Delamere.

To see the full set of Booth’s maps and enlarge areas for free, visit https://booth.lse.ac.uk/learn-more/download-maps  

In more detail:

I imagined Jack and Will as living in ‘Limehouse Row’, which didn’t exist, but which can be taken for the area to the right of Ropemakers Fields, in the dense black area (‘semi-criminal’, by the key), which is among the reddish/purple area (‘poor and comfortable mixed’).

Here’s the key:

Baxter hails from Shadwell, slightly to the west of Jack, but as you can see, a very similar mix of people poor enough to be considered criminal class, and what we might now call upper-working class. In other words, hard-working men with their own businesses, like Baxter’s father, are alongside the unemployed. It is easy to see why there was so much dissent and tension in the East End at the time.

Part of the Shadwell area – Limehouse is just off to the right.

Compare the docklands area to where Clearwater House and Delamere House are situated.

Again, Bucks Avenue doesn’t exist. I chose ‘Bucks’ right back in ‘Deviant Desire’ because Bucks Row was the location of a Jack the Ripper murder, and Clearwater, Silas, and the rest were ‘young bucks.’

My Delamere House is situated roughly where the Cavalry Barracks stand, and lies among a lot of red and orange, meaning my boys now live among the well-to-do, wealthy and comfortable, which is what all of the characters now are.

This is the land of Lord Clearwater, and now, Jack Merrit and Co., and we must remember that everyone now living in Delamere House has either come from a very lower-class background or, in the case of servants, from a slightly upper-lower working-class background. The one society might have classified as being the highest class by birth would be Charlie Inning, because his father worked in the city and the family lived in the country. Booth didn’t cast his survey that wide, so I can’t comment on what he might have thought, but according to him, among the other characters, Mr Sparks might have come top of the class by being lower-middle class, because she was from the Streatham area. Again, the map didn’t cover that far south, so I can’t be sure.

It’s interesting, though, that because of a change in fortune, the cast-class order, by 1894, has been rearranged.

Their changes in fortune are, ultimately, thanks to the philanthropist, Lord Clearwater and his desire to buck the fashionable class-system trend, and lift the lower classes to a position of something higher.

However, the Delamere characters still fit into social classes either because of where they come from or where they now see themselves. (Or would have, had the map been available then.)

I drew up a list, classifying them according to the class they are now in, and saw that by using the classification very loosely, I could fit one into every class by varying degrees. For the Clearwater/Delamere nerds amongst us (and I, of course, include myself in that), here’s the list from top down as the characters might have seen themselves according to the map of 1889.

Why?

Because it helps the writer to know what class society considered his characters to be from, and considered themselves to be in, especially in the late 19th century and onwards, when a person’s class meant everything.

I could expand the list to cover all characters in all three mystery series, but we’d be here all day because there are so many. However, I thought you might find the above interesting, and I might include it, without maps, in the author’s notes of ‘A Night of Opposites’, which should be with you in a couple of weeks.

WIP Update: Delamere 11

Still with no definite title, Delamere 11 is progressing well. I have to admit, this is the first one where I have kept so much detail in my notebooks as I go. Not that the mystery is particularly complicated (no more than usual), but because there are backstories of minor characters which have to be accurate, believable and interesting, and yet, which have to be consistent.

Some books write themselves.

Snake Hill’ was one of these, where I started with an ending, and then started with the start, and the two seemed to meet logically along the way. This time, I have started in the same way and know where I am heading, but I have approached the first draft with a more critical eye than usual.

Because there are many tiny details to be sure of, and because some characters have altered the story for me along the way (mildly), I have had to go back, read again, change or update, and then carry on. Yesterday, for example, I reread five chapters of draft one, in effect turning them into a draft two, while also continuing draft one further along in the story. All the time jotting notes such as 24 years in an asylum, or, Remember the Spiritualist Magazine, and Mr Phinigan Slack, secretary and illusion maker, Drury Lane. They mean something to me!

As for word count, I am at 66,000 words, and am starting to build towards a climax of the main mystery, the backstory subplot (highly connected to the main mystery), and a subplot for Baxter, while hopefully continuing to keep the reader guessing while ramping up the tension. This appeared today in a review/summary of one of the series seen on a popular Facebook page: As always in these books, the fairly placid opening chapters begin to speed up, until the heart-stopping denouement brings everything to a climax.

I have been receiving several of these excellent write-ups of late, and on Saturday, I intend to share with you some pages on Facebook that have been more than generous in their praise and support of the Delamere Series (and Clearwater), so you might also join the groups and find more indie authors to read.

On which note, the end of the month approaches, and that means a last few departing book fares to advertise, and soon, some new ones to tell you about.

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Update and Make Notes

Today’s work in progress update is to let you know that I am now over halfway through the first draft of ‘Thirteen’ (working title, and it’s book 11 in the series), and had just had my midway twist. The trouble is, I wrote it a couple of days ago, and have had a day off in between, and now, I can’t remember what I wrote, so today will start with reading back. I turn to my notes, and find them of some help, although, as you can see, they may baffle some people, including myself.

That is one page of 11 so far on this story alone. As I write the chapters, I jot down important facts for later, and then, when the mood hits, I filter the notes and write up a file that I can edit as I go. Here, for example, is a chart I made up to keep track of the murders in ‘Acts of Faith.’

In the case of ‘Thirteen’, I have a file called ‘Tie ups’, which is where I note plot points, conversations, clues and questions that I must come back to and answer later in the book. I can’t show you that or tell you too much as that would give away spoilers.

Do all authors do this? I don’t know. I do know that some authors plot and plan their entire story before starting out. They make up lengthy backstories about their characters, they, as they do when making a film, will have a character ‘bible’, and list all their traits and mannerisms, loves and hates and so on ad infinitum. Then, they will so the same with the plot, and draw grids with action lines and other grids with emotional throughlines, great big red arrows for twists and, beneath, a rough wordcount. Then, they will start writing.

I have tried that approach, and it’s not for me. In the case of Delamere Eleven, I was reading a newspaper from 1893, looking for ideas, when I came across a mention of the Thirteen Club. I’d not heard about them before, so I did some research, and later that day, started writing the book. I had a rough idea where the story would end up, and nothing else. That’s the fun part about making it up as you go – I only know as much as my characters know. I write, mainly, from the point of view of my leads, Jack and Will Merrit, and now, Ben Baxter (sometimes others). These are the investigators, and they have no idea what they are investigating until they begin, and neither do I.

When starting a new story, I set a scene for something to come, and near the start of the story/scene, I make sure the ‘domestic’ matters are up to date. (I have a nasty habit of placing characters and keeping readers informed of their lives. Example: in this book, Simeon is learning to drive. Is that relevant to the plot? It might turn out to be, I don’t know yet.) How the scene/story will end, I can’t tell you, not at the start because Jack and Co don’t know what’s coming their way either.

Therefore, I make notes as I go. Notes and ideas. They drop into my head as I’m bashing the keyboard, and I take a hurried moment to write something down, which is why my handwriting is so messy. Later, after reading back what I have written, I will adjust them or file them in the Tie Ups file. Also, when an idea occurs, I note it at the start of the next chapter. I finish, say, Chapter Nine, reread it and type up a list of where the story is going next. This I do under a new document, in this case, ‘Chapter Ten.’ Not only does this remind me of what I was thinking, but it usually gives me a PoC. A Point of Chapter, as I call it. Every sequence, section, scene, needs a point of some sort, and if you set off on a new chapter with the PoC in mind, you can’t go wrong.

Where you go wrong is when you forget to make notes and rely on your characters to remember what they were going to do, talk about, or discover. Sadly, without you knowing, they don’t know, so all you can do is knuckle down and see what they are going to throw at you next.

Yesterday, when setting up today’s writing, I prepared Chapter Fifteen, and the first few notes read:

Friday morning
Jack bad night worrying about Larkin
Catch up on hotel visit
Ned’s findings

There you go. That’s what we can expect to find in the next chapter, except there are 540 words of notes and reminders, so who knows what Jack is plotting. Not me!


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The Thirteen Club

My news this week is that I am now on chapter ten of Delamere Eleven with a working title of Thirteen. Funnily enough, this one isn’t about numbers, plural, but is inspired by the number thirteen.

After my Christmas and New Year break, I turned my mind to the next Delamere mystery, and found I was looking at an empty folder. When this happens, when I know I must write something but don’t have the ‘hook’ that starts the flow of inspiration, I turn to the news of the time. In this case, January 1894. (A couple of weeks after the events in the Clearwater Tales Vol. Two, ‘1893’, if you haven’t discovered that yet.)

It was while browsing the National Newspaper Archives that my eyes fell upon an article that appeared in The Sketch on January 17th, 1894, and an idea began to form. I had been looking for something else, but as I read the article, I became more and more intrigued with what I was reading, and, by the time I’d finished, I had found my ‘hook.’

This is the word that I use when I mean background, setting, or gimmick. For example, as ‘Follow the Van’ was set among London music halls, so Number Eleven could be set among the Thirteen Club. Rather, it could begin there, and I could build a mystery around their ethos to ridicule superstitions in the way ‘Acts of Faith’ was built around martyrdoms.

The Holborn Restaurant (Edwardian photo), where the Thuirteen Club held their dinners.

That’s what I am doing, and I have started with a rough draft of the action plot, which will change as I go through, because I tend to set my detectives mysteries without knowing myself the who and why of the crime. I also have an idea for an emotional subplot into which I want to weave some erotic or more graphic scene, because it’s been a long time since we’ve seen any of that on the Delamere pages.

While doing this, I have also had an idea for a ‘How To’ set of articles to assist new authors in my genres, which may or may not turn into a publication. Watch this space.

So, I am definitely back into creative mode and plodding on. Meanwhile, I am also taking an active part in various promotions to hopefully boost not only my readership, but also that of other indie authors. I have a few ongoing promos this month, as you might have seen from the recent newsletter, and I’ll drop them here along the way.

Let’s start with this one, which is only running until February 19th:

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The Thirteen Club

Is this the title of the next Delamere mystery? I’m not sure.
What is the Thirteen Club? In my case, it’s not a clothing store in Canada, but one of those quirky, Victorian societies. In this case, it sought to debunk superstitions. It met at least once a year, usually on the 13th of the month, and held a dinner at which there were 13 tables of 13 people each, 13 waiters, speeches that lasted 13 minutes, toasts with only 13 words, and members of the group would smash mirrors and walk under ladders — and more.

Here’s what the Illustrated Police News wrote on January 6th, 1894, in regard to the meeting due to be held on the 13th of that month.

The Thirteen Club

Formed to demonstrate the folly of the superstitious, this club has gone on prospering, and with every appearance of still further advancement. The annual feast will be held in room number 13 of the Holborn Restaurant, and as is customary on these occasions, members and their friends will occupy thirteen tables with thirteen at each. Peacocks’ feathers will abound, while the knives and forks will be crossed, and any quantity of salt will be spilt. During the evening, the toast-master, instead of informing the assembly that the chairman will be happy to take wine with them, will vary the stereotyped declaration by announcing that Mr Furniss will be happy to spill salt with them. The club saltcellars are coffin shaped, and the best “dim religious light” obtainable from skull-shaped lamps will illuminate the banqueting hall, before entering which the company will pass under the club ladder. Other details which are said to be “too gruesome to mention,” will be revealed at the last moment.

Inside the Holborn Restaurant, where the meeting was held on January 13th, 1894. (This is a later, Edwardian, photo.)

The Delamere Involvement

It’s a very new idea – I only came across it yesterday, but I thought it would be fun to put Jack and Larkin at that dinner, which really did happen on 13th January, 1894. Ah, but then what?

That’s what I am going to think about over the weekend – a mystery based around the Thirteen Club, but what mystery? I also want the next book to have a little more ‘heat’, so I am planning something for Baxter and Charlie. A previous character may be coming back, too, and we still have the madman Orlando Temple on the loose, so there is a lot to consider as I slowly start my way back to creative work after a long break.

Before you go, though… There is still a promo featuring one of my titles, so if you’ve not looked at what’s on offer this month, here’s the link.

New Year, New Attitude: Memoirs, Poetry, Relationship, Inspirational reads

Here’s something slightly different from my usual promotion. It’s a collection of 28 titles, all of which are non-fiction. In fact, they are more along the lines of inspirational fic, women’s fic, literary fiction, memoirs, poetry, etc. There are no self-help books, and nothing done by AI.

I have entered my godfather’s biography, ‘Bobby, a Life Worth Living’, into this promo.

Work In Progress: ‘1893’

To be honest, I am now working on only one thing, and when that is done, I won’t be working on anything else until the New Year. I believe I have said before, I aim to have ‘1893’ ready for you before Christmas.

A quick summary:

Five characters meet in a fog-bound railway station the night before Christmas Eve, 1893, and there, they are catered for by the stationmaster, Harry Carnforth. Their onward train is delayed, so they spend the night telling each other stories. There is also a plot surrounding these shorts, so the book, like ‘1892’, is a set of short stories set within a novella, I suppose. It, like its counterpart, should run to about 60,000 words.

I am currently up to 51,000 words, but I still have a way to go, so there will be editing involved later.

I have given myself until the end of this month to produce a decent second draft, so I need to get on with it, as there are still two stories to complete, plus the rest of the outer story which wraps them.

To, hopefully, keep you interested, here is another quick snippet, this time from (the unedited) ‘The Barrister’s Tale, Part One.’


Chapter VI
THE BARRISTER’S TALE, PART ONE

Hard leather soles clacked on the marble tiles as the defence barrister (to be) hurried to the robing room. With his morning’s brief under one arm, and his beloved copy of Blackstone’s under the other, he shouldered his way backwards through a pair of double doors, and clacked his way into another, longer and more hallowed marble corridor. There, a murder of hooded crows flitted this way and that, stopped to peck over some titbit of a case, or hung around the alcoves smoking pipes, but mainly, they were in the process of finding a place to settle for the morning; a courtroom where they could caw and crow and jabber and feel very important because they knew the law.

Creswell, head down, knew exactly what room he was making for, and also knew that the slightest delay would cause him to be late. All the same, there were rituals to follow, and they began with the ancient Rite of the Unnecessary Greeting, where each exchange was accompanied by a brief nod.

‘Creswell.’

‘Blinkinthop.’

‘Creswell.’

‘Smitherston-Minor.’

‘It’s Smitherson-Major, actually.’

‘That’s a matter of opinion. Mackay.’

‘Creswell.’

‘Creswell… Blithering idiot, that’s a mirror.’

The robing room was just as hectic, but also a place where the Rite of the Unnecessary Greeting became expanded.

‘Creswell.’

‘Jones.’

‘Are you well?’

‘Well enough. What you got?’

‘Theft. It’s all theft this morning.’

‘Morning, Creswell.’

‘Larrow.’

‘I think you’re up against me.’

Creswell was, because he was reaching over the man to collect a book.

‘Who do we have to entertain this morning, Mr Larrow? Any idea?’

In Creswell’s opinion, Larrow had very little idea about anything, certainly not the law. How he ever became a barrister was beyond Creswell’s ken, and he had hoped for a more worthy opposition in the, hopefully, last case of his pupillage.

‘No, I have no idea,’ the prosecution replied, donning his wig to become more like a white-headed woodpecker than a hooded crow. He certainly had the nose for it. ‘Clerk told me a name, but it’s not one I know. He’s coming in from out of town, they say. The Honourable…’ he examined a docket, ‘Sir Barkley Sproot, but no-one seems to have heard of him.

‘Then I, alas, am also no-one,’ Creswell said, fixing the last of his plumage. ‘Let’s hope Sproot’s a hoot, eh?’

‘Hoot is the word,’ Larrow quipped as he headed for the door.

‘Oh? Why?’

‘Read your brief, Creswell,’ the opposition replied and was lost to the flock.


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What Next?

With ‘A Depraved Indifference’ now out there and available, I start to wonder, ‘What next?’

I am currently writing notes and drafts for another collection of shorts to make up a Clearwater Tales Volume Two, and have the prologue, half of one character’s story, nearly all of another’s, and no idea what the other three stories and the through-line will be. Also, I am talking things slowoy at eth desk for a while, thanks to various repateteive strain injuries. We’re going away on a trip in just over six weeks, so there will be a two week break over Christmas, a break from everything for a change. I am usual here on Christmas Day checking emails and sales, but not this year. I shall be elsewhere.

Meanwhile, though, the first review of ‘Indifference’ is in, and the reviewer was not indifferent at all.

The book is also currently #21 in LGBT + Mystery on Amazon, doing better than some books that have (allegedly) more than 24,500 star ratings. How does any book get that many, I wonder?

Talking of reviews, I found this one for Deviant Desire today, and I wish there was a way of replying to the reviewer. This is a great idea for another Clearwater prequel, though it would mean some intense research in naval procedures, ranks and all that, and a bit of imagination, but I am used to that.

Dear Mr. Marsh: I would love to read a back story prequel on Simon Harrington, the guy who was apparently All That and a bag of chips. Three men fell deeply in love with him, fought viciously over him, and two of them went insane because of him. That’s a story I’d love to read.

I shall have a think and add it to my list of possibilities for the future. Or maybe I could include the story in the next Clearwater Tales, the one I am tinkering with right now? There’s a thought… I’d better get writing.


PROMOS

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A Thriller of a Blurb?

Hello!

I have the blurb for ‘A Depraved Indifference’, the Delamere Files, Book Ten. The MS is with the proofreader, who has already attended to the blurb and author’s notes for me, and I am also talking to Scott about a map for the front of this one – so, as they say, it’s all go!

I also have another great collection of thrillers and mysteries to share with you, and I’ll put the link at the bottom of this post.

Meanwhile, here’s the blurb:

A Depraved Indifference
The Delamere Files Book Ten

Jack Merrit longs for a case more challenging than burglaries and missing jewels, and when someone finds a skeleton inside a pipe organ, his wish comes true. At first, the strange discovery in the church of St Clement Danes seems like a prank, but when Jack’s next call is to a crime within earshot of the bells of St Martin’s, an uneasy pattern emerges.

Oranges and lemons say the bells of St Clement’s
You owe me five farthings, say the bells of St Martin’s

And then, the murders start.

If the first is chance, a second becomes a coincidence, but a third? That’s a pattern, and these are no ordinary murders. They occur in churches named in the rhyme, and they involve diabolical contraptions that kill seemingly random victims. Asked by both London police forces to investigate without being told why, Jack and his men embark on an investigation knowing where the killer will strike next, but not when.

When the killer invites Jack to join his game, a contest of intellect begins, and knowing failure will lead to disgrace, he pits himself against his most cunning adversary so far.


Thriller, Mystery & Suspense – Huge promo

You can click on either or both of these links; they will take you to the same place, but either James or Jackson will get the kudos (and score) generated by your click.

The 51 titles in this promo take us mainly into the world of straight adventure, mystery and thrillers. I had a look, and I think my ‘Finding a Way’ is the only gay and historical offering, but you never know, it might pick up some new readers.

The same goes for my ‘The Saddling’ which is in here. (Note: I must get Andjela to design me a new cover.)

The Saddling              James Collins

Finding a Way             Jackson Marsh

First Draft Done

This will be just a very quick update to let you know the first draft of ‘A Depraved Indifference’ is now complete. Phew! That was a fun one to work through. You will be in for an adventure in mystery. There’s no angst or love story, and not much personal difficulty in this story, not with my main characters. However, the villain is the one who carries the emotional through line, and that’s about the first time I’ve written that way, so that was interesting.

I am now about to start on my reading back. I should point out that when I say the first draft is finished, I mean I have reached the end of telling myself the story. As I have been doing that, I have also been going back and rereading, making changes, improving, and second-drafting chapters, so really, I am about to embark on my third draft, which is mainly a case of fiddling with, improving, checking, and saying, ‘What on earth did I mean by that?’

Meanwhile, I will send Andjela some ideas for a cover and think about an illustration. Does it need one? I can’t put in an image of the villain because I don’t know what he looks like, and anyone else would seem out of place. We’ll see.

The monthly newsletter should be out this morning with a freebie kind of attached (you find the freebie via a link), and I’ll tell you more about the promos I am in later in the month.

WIP: A Depraved Indifference

Things are heating up. The crimes are becoming more baffling; someone’s not saying something for some reason (there’s a cover-up), but Jack and Bax are determined to put a stop to someone’s evil game before it’s too late. It’s already too late for some, and the pressure is on from both London police forces. To top it all, I think I have invented Jack’s ultimate sparring partner, the evil genius who will hound him for the rest of his career, and probably afterwards. Someone who may appear in the next story, or who may vanish for a while, only to resurface later…

As you might gather, ‘A Depraved Indifference’ is really taking shape, and I am now into the final reel. There are still roughly 25,000 words to go (at least) to bring the story to whatever conclusion it will have, but I am up to 73,000 words and, at last, Jack and his men finally have some information they can work on. The next big clue will be an invitation, but before I get there, I need to investigate something that has happened at St Dunstan’s Church, Stepney.

‘When will that be? Say the bells of Stepney.’

That will be as soon as I have posted this and made another cup of tea. Then, I will continue with chapter twenty-four. Soon, I’ll have to set about writing the blurb and thinking of a cover. Gosh, this being a full-time author thing makes for a great life!

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Well, made for Clearwater or what? I’ve entered Deviant Desire and Finding a Way into this one. I couldn’t add the Larkspur Series, because I could only put in two books, but Larkspur runs on from Clearwater, so people will find it on their own – if they make it through the 10 Clearwater stories, which I hope they do.

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